This are a few hints I wrote as writing tips for the Lucy Cavendish first novel competition. I hope you find them useful.
1) The beginning has to be compelling. You need to suggest as early as possible that your character will need to do something about a difficult situation.
2) Rather than racking your brain for a plot think more about exploring a situation. Ask, ‘What if? …’
3) There should be something special or interesting about your central character. They should be someone we could care about.
4) Dialogue needs to be convincing. We don’t speak in perfect sentences!
5) Characters need conflict. We might not have faced the same ones, or not ones so bad, but we’ve all had troubles and set-backs. Reading about fictional ones can illuminate your own.
6) Show don’t tell. Help your reader notice things but let them think and discover things for themselves – always the best way to learn anything.
7) There is no special writer’s language! Don’t show off at your readers’ expense with long words, foreign terms etc. A novel should be for readers, not therapy for the writer.